His face frowned as he was looking for his bag.
His body trembled, he was worried he wouldn't find it in time.
He grumbled as if the earth shook.
We were learning about show don´t tell show don´t tell is when it describes a persons face body voice
I found it easy to write
I found it hard to come up with words
I really enjoyed coming up with words though
Next time I need to write better
Kia ora my name is Michelle i go to Roscommon school.I like how you told the story and also like how you described you story.but i think you got to realy got to tell the story like your emotions.
ReplyDeleteHello my name is Eta and i go to Roscommon School.I liked your blog because your writing was very intersting.How did you choose what to write aboute?
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