His face frowned as he was looking for his bag.
His body trembled, he was worried he wouldn't find it in time.
He grumbled as if the earth shook.
We were learning about show don´t tell show don´t tell is when it describes a persons face body voice
I found it easy to write
I found it hard to come up with words
I really enjoyed coming up with words though
Next time I need to write better