Friday, 5 March 2021

narrative: mother horse

WALT write a narratives using adjectives.

One day mother horse took her ponies to the dark forest to look for berries. Mother horse saw a ferocious big tiger and she ran away from her ponies.

Mother horse started limping, her leg looked sore.

The tiger saw the horse but did not see the ponies.

The tiger ran after the mother horse.

Mother horse's leg was not sore, so she kicked the tiger and galloped away back to her ponies.

Wednesday, 3 March 2021

this is my pepeha

Ko Mamari tōku waka

Ko  Putahi tōku maunga

Ko  Waiorooro tōku awa 

Ko  Kohewhata tōku marae

Ko Ngati Whakaeke tōku hapu

Ko tōku Iwi 

Ko Carla tōku Mama

Ko Dee toku karani ma

Ko Zion ahau 



Mother Horse

 WALT write a narrative using adjectives.


One day mother horse took her ponies to the Dark forest to look for berries. Mother horse saw a ferocious, big tiger and she ran away from her ponies.

Mother horse started limping, her leg looked sore.

The tiger saw the horse but did not see the ponies.

The tiger ran after the mother horse.

Mother horses leg was not sore so she kicked the tiger and galloped away back to her ponies.



We are learning about narratives.

I found it easy to write a narrative because I remembered to use the orientation and include my characters and setting. 

I found it hard to think about writing my own narrative.

I really enjoyed accomplishing my work and challenging myself.

Next time I need to think of better adjectives and adverbs for my writing.