WALT write a narratives using adjectives.
One day mother horse took her ponies to the dark forest to look for berries. Mother horse saw a ferocious big tiger and she ran away from her ponies.
Mother horse started limping, her leg looked sore.
The tiger saw the horse but did not see the ponies.
The tiger ran after the mother horse.
Mother horse's leg was not sore, so she kicked the tiger and galloped away back to her ponies.
I am a year 5 learner at Tautoro School in Northland, New Zealand. I am in room 6 and my teacher is Whaea Debb.
Friday, 5 March 2021
Wednesday, 3 March 2021
this is my pepeha
Ko Mamari tōku waka
Ko Putahi tōku maunga
Ko Waiorooro tōku awa
Ko Kohewhata tōku marae
Ko Ngati Whakaeke tōku hapu
Ko tōku Iwi
Ko Carla tōku Mama
Ko Dee toku karani ma
Ko Zion ahau
Mother Horse
WALT write a narrative using adjectives.
One day mother horse took her ponies to the Dark forest to look for berries. Mother horse saw a ferocious, big tiger and she ran away from her ponies.
Mother horse started limping, her leg looked sore.
The tiger saw the horse but did not see the ponies.
The tiger ran after the mother horse.
Mother horses leg was not sore so she kicked the tiger and galloped away back to her ponies.
We are learning about narratives.
I found it easy to write a narrative because I remembered to use the orientation and include my characters and setting.
I found it hard to think about writing my own narrative.
I really enjoyed accomplishing my work and challenging myself.
Next time I need to think of better adjectives and adverbs for my writing.
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